Source of Inspiration

 

 

HOW, WHY AND  WHERE OF STEPHEN GILL’S WRITING

 

 

*Partly appeared in Something About the

Author, vol. 63, page 35-37, Gale

Research, USA.

 

 

I have often been asked why, how, and when I became a writer, and I have always said go and ask any flower why it spreads its fragrance around, or ask the moon why it delights people with its silvery beams, or  ask the birds why they sing early in the morning.  It is like asking me why I breathe. It may be a compulsion or a deep desire to share my ideas, knowledge and experiences with others. I don't know the answer in a simple and straightforward way. However, when I began going deep within me to analyse this question, I started sensing that it may be a touch of my parents which has shaped me as a writer.

 

My mother was a school teacher and a good storyteller. She was very particular about our education and, therefore, gave special attention to our regular attendance at school and tried her utmost to keep us away from the influence of the children who were disinterested in their studies. My father, a good bread-earner, edited a religious magazine for a while and was unusually interested in writing letters.

 

Yet, I hated school and played truant whenever I could. I hated my curriculum and classroom, but that does not mean that I hated books. Rather, I loved to read anything, except the text books. I loved to read, especially fiction and poetry. Our home was full of books, and my father was a zealous subscriber to several dailies and monthlies. In that environment, I became a voracious reader from my early childhood. When nothing was available, I would borrow or buy materials to satisfy my thirst. This habit remained a part of me for whole life. l read the Bible several times.

 

In the later part of my teens, I began to move among writers and would-be writers; nearly all of them were older  than I was. Some of them had published material to their credit. Our chats often ended in discussing literary topics.  I always listened attentively to their comments on a story, a poem, or an author. I still cherish some of their ideas.

 

Due to my unusual zest for books and the protective nature of my mother, and a few other reasons,   which kept me away from other children, I became lonely which helped to sharpen my thinking and imagination. l never felt loneliness because I enjoyed dwelling in the domain of my fancy,  like Simon who dreams of the Snow King and his castle in my children story  Simon and  the Snow King.

 

My aloofness during my childhood and later, to some extent also in my teens, may be largely responsible for my feeling ill-at-ease in a dialogue when I am alone with a stranger.  I am  reasonably relaxed when I give a talk or a lecture to a crowd and more so when I am behind a public- address system. 

 

It may be a factor that has affected my writing in one area at least. A reader may not be able to detect it. I am not reluctant to admit that I find it difficult  to develop a conversation in a story between two or more characters. I have to do much thinking and rewriting to do this. I lose my patience because I prefer to describe  or  narrate. Consequently, I use dialogues or conversations sparingly, enough to break  the monotony of any continuous narration.

 

On the other hand, ideas appear to me easily. They are diamonds, rough in their original form; I have to chisel and polish them in order to make them presentable. Though it  is a painful process, I do not give up easily. I keep revising and editing them till I am nearly satisfied; usually it takes six to ten  times of rewriting or editing. My next step is to let my writing simmer or settle down for weeks or months before I take it up again to read it afresh to polish it further. I consider this to be an important stage, because it breaks my emotional bonds with that particular piece of writing. Once I feel somewhat happy over the outcome of my labour, I begin showing it to others-- two or three friends--asking them for their blue pencilling. I enjoy doing  revisions.

 

I believe that a writer for children should not forget that his or her readers, the future citizens of their country, are passing through a most formative period of their lives. This thought is ever  present in my mind when I write. Therefore, I do not hesitate to sprinkle hints wherever it is possible for the self-improvement of my readers.

 

Subjects do not occur to me suddenly over a cup of tea, or while driving, or having a shower. They  remain in my mind for a long time. I carry  their seeds as a pregnant woman would  her fetus. For instance, the story of Simon  and the Snow King, a juvenile,  began to take shape when my son Ajay, during his childhood, insisted that I tell him a story every night. The well of my imagination soon went dry. That was the time when I began to admire the fertile imagination of my mother, who used to tell me  always something new with a moral before I fell asleep. Because my son was the source of inspiration for this story, I introduced the real names of my children, Ajay and Rekha, which blend very well with the ingredients of the tale.

 

The Blessings of a Bird , another children story book, also contains a moral-- more obvious this  time. The story was inspired by a newspaper article about birds and flowers and their psychological impact on the environment. The leading characters I modelled on the lives of some welfare recipients who were my neighbours when I was a student and rented a cheap room in Montreal. I moulded everything in the smithy of my imagination.

 

My friends and the people I meet even most casually, often appear in one form or another in my writing. I am sure most writers do the same. After all, we writers have to borrow  material from somewhere to build our worlds. However, the real persons have to pass through the chamber of  the writer's  mind where their clothes and costumes are changed-- sometimes to such an extent that even the proto-types fail to recognize themselves.

 

Among the influences, my mother is the one that has shaped my development as a writer. Her stories, saying, morality, sense of sacrifice for the betterment of her children has shaped my outlook in life as well as largely my writing.

 

She is there in my all three novels Why, Immigrant and The Loyalist City. I have dedicated my collection Songs Before Shrine to her. The book starts with a poem that is entirely about her. I am listing that poem towards the end to share with my readers:

 


 

TO MOTHER

 

Years have gone by

still

I see your tearful eyes                                  

and catch the choking moans

coming from the crumbling pyramid

of pains.

 

When

dawn is dimmed

amidst dull  clouds

and shroud is spread                                   

on my despair

your name emanates

in pleasing designs.

 

Image of sacrifice

message of hope

you are highly prized.

The gift of this life                                         

I owe to you.                          

                                                                                   

A blind boy

shattered  in  destiny’s cage

I long for your loving care.

Mother dear

I wish you were here.

 

---Stephen Gill---

 

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